"People are too various to be treated so lightly,
and I am too various to be trusted," David says
as Baldwin would have him to, while drinking,
while he is staring through his own reflection
framed by the night's window pane, of a small
rented room, on a poor side of Paris.


2

He seems fraught as a palsied peony
stricken by fall's first frost. He ambles

without missing his mark. I have been him,
though not for those very same reasons
that resign him to such a stoic resolve.
What reasons have to do with sorrow,
to one whose world is thwarted, diminished
until he is seriously out of sorts, so much,


1

that even when he is speaking to himself
he ends his own statements with retorts?

 

Posted by wll3ki on May 3, 2008
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RG on paragraph 3:

I love this stanza!

May 3, 2008 1:29 pm
SBW on whole page :

Hello Wll, welcome to the blog.

Terrific poem. I wonder if there are more poems about David and Baldwin. I love the notion of these two people –and I would like to know more about their being in Paris and what has happened to them each to each.

Also Wll, look forward to your in-put — especially as SBW is working her way through a poem.

Again, welcome.

SBW

May 3, 2008 4:13 pm
SBW on paragraph 3:

I like this stanza too, and I like the way it balances the final two lines.

SBW

May 3, 2008 4:14 pm
SBW on paragraph 5:

I like the ending here — the “speaking to himself” but is there a question here?

SBW

May 3, 2008 4:15 pm
wll3ki on whole page :

Thanks so much for your comments SBW!

May 4, 2008 4:06 pm
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