1

She was,
     might have been a boy,
perhaps a minder of clocks
     with fixed hours
and twisted broken hands.


2

She might have been a boy 
     but was Carson nevertheless,
and her mama declared,
      in dulcet undertones,
that her daughter would be a genius
     someday, in some place north of mercy,
and she placed the baby's fingers,
     delicate on ivory keys, tuned
into love, substantial as igneous rock
     exposed to blueblackgray skies.

She was consonant with vowels
      that sang on chain gangs,
rank with sweat
     when dust was thick
and preachers cottoned to
     women walking barefoot
down Cheehaw Steet,
     women who stretched out
palms waiting to be read.

She was trying to say 
     how she was before she knew
the answers to renditions
     that left her dry and wanting,
left her like a phrase of music
     silent, silent in the heat of the heart.

SBW 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
 

 

Posted by SBW on May 15, 2008
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Rob on whole page :

Sue, Wow! Is this new? If so, it’s nice to know that when you come back from a dry spell, you come back strong. I love this poem! And with the stuff that you and Angela have posted the last couple of days, I’m going to have to be a lot more careful about what I put up here. The bar has been raised. High.

May 15, 2008 7:23 pm
Rob on paragraph 1:

I love the clock imagery, the “fixed hours / and twisted broken hands.”

May 15, 2008 7:24 pm
Rob on paragraph 2:

“someday, in some place north of mercy”–that’s some good $#!+…

Same is true for “She was consonant with vowels”

I feel small and very jealous right now.

May 15, 2008 7:26 pm
Meagan M. on paragraph 2:

I just love “dulcet undertones” and “consonant with vowels.” Your wordplay in this poem is amazing!

May 27, 2008 3:21 pm
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