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Accent


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"Southern" is something
movie actors cannot replicate-
especially not
that kid who played Jem
in To Kill a Mockingbird,

but I can laugh and love
Miss Scarlett's humid vowels
because Ms. Margaret, her heart
and voice, knew well the heat
of a real Atlanta barbecue.


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Some leave and lose the taste
of home, the muscle memory
of dropped r and gerund,
spit out the earth-salted metaphor,
the parable in one word.


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I savor sweet the rich
brown sugar glaze of Faulkner
and O'Connor, save bittersweet
drippings of sorghum wisdom
and rich pork fat humor.

The mother's milk of sound stains
like tobacco: lips, tongue, lungs, and teeth.
Bleach it linen yellow like bones
in the sun, or tuck it
deep in the pocket of a cheek.

Posted by Meagan M. on July 15, 2008
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Rob on whole page :

Meagan,
This is excellent! I can’t wait to hear to demonstrate it next weekend!

July 16, 2008 8:37 am
Rob on paragraph 3:

I know it’s just my own warped linguistic observations, but what truly marks a Southern accent to me is the misplaced diphthong (e.g., long-I’s without a diphthong and pretty much every other non-diphthonged vowel with one crammed in THAY-uhh..).

July 16, 2008 8:46 am
Meagan M. :

You’re so right! I never knew exactly what to call that before, but that’s what I was talking about less directly in relation to Miss Scarlett, the “humid vowels.” It’s what slows all the words down, like speaking through water. I’ll have to make it my mission to fit “dipthong” into a poem some day!

July 16, 2008 10:37 am
SBW on whole page :

This is a super Southern poem. You can feel its linguistic humidity, taste its brown-sugar references, and hear it with baited breath. Oh, I want to hear you read this one.

SBW

July 17, 2008 11:53 pm
Nathan on paragraph 1:

One of the poems you’ve written that stands out to me the most was the one from last fall about the dog with rabies…. because of the reference to Atticus. Another great To Kill a Mockingbird references!

July 18, 2008 2:27 pm
Nathan on paragraph 4:

Sweet, rich, and brown sugar adequately describe Southern language, as well as southern food.

July 18, 2008 2:27 pm
Nathan on whole page :

This is an awesome poem. I don’t much like the title though.

July 18, 2008 2:28 pm
Alexis on whole page :

this is incredible…i wouldn’t even know how to begin to think to put these words together like this…what an amazing poem–even the figurative lines bring such tangible imagery to mind…this is amazing…

July 18, 2008 7:41 pm
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